JC

This chapter is COMPLETE =D See chapter 2! =D thank you for reading! -JC

I agree, the fight was rushed. A lot. Now, I really like Lyla, don't get me wrong...but it just seems weird now. You think there'd be a lot more going ...

I would love help =D, Thanks Clau

Night Mistress- Part three is posted =D

I've re-written this chapter.

What is Jaime doing? Backing off and being a complete sissy about life thinking that she deserves more pity than anybody else in the world. I guess I've always kind-of ...

Je ne sais quoi is french for "I don't know"

Chapter 2 -Part One My heart had the most annoying habit of beating really hard when I was nervous. Sometimes, times like these, it was hard to breathe. Band was ...

Crap! I had a totally awesome crit for this, and my stupid internet failed! AHHHHH! hehe, so, I have to re-read this, okay-k? Sorry I haven't returned your call yet. ...

Most people didn't even call me by my name but as Mr. Beaufort's Daughter. This was oddly worded. Change it up a bit, and it'll be good. :idea: You can ...

Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 35 -Never Existed -On Both Accounts Amber flew around the house desperately trying to clean up as much as possible. Jamie was sitting on the ...

Sorry, I would have put it there, had I known it was poetry. Thank you though. -JC

Really any feedback helps. Thank you. And uh...about the whole poetic prose thing....I haven't studied poetry enough to really know what that is. Mostly I avoid if this is it...well, ...

JC runs up behind Razorblade and pours sugar in her drink while she's not looking.

Casting sideways glances, longing for the electric chemistry when at last eyes touch. Skin brushes against skin, rising hairs so fine, and longings so pure. Soul brushes soul, arising emotions ...