JC

JC runs up to Waffles, holding Claires arm which is still stuck in her mouth. "HELP!" She said.

JC decides to help Claire in her pitiful state. She grabs Claire's arm and starts to tug on it...then she has to stop because she is laughing too hard. =D

JC continues to stand in the dark, but gets so bored she starts knawing on her own fist and decides,"Hmm... I wonder how much of my hand I can fit ...

AH! Much, much better. This was just so much more natural and intresting. *claps* hehe. A few small things though: decades old I could be wrong, but I think this ...

Thanks Clau. While I was writing this one I had my doubts about it, the beginning was too shaky in my eyes, but it seems to have turned out okay. ...

hehe congrats! =D

Sorry it's confusing...and don't worry about being cruel, everybody needs a healthy dose of reality, otherwise nothing would ever improve. So thank you, and please, continue the crits the way ...

Np. Tommorrow kk?

yeah....sorry bout that

they were divorced. And I'm pretty sure you're reading it right.... wait...no...nevermind...sorry

1. It does say why she fired Tammy. 2. What shall I do about the flashback?

Those are all really good. I love the first one though!

I like the first one more. The guy's lips in the second one are kind-of weird...too far down or something...

i don't get it...but it is hard to see...

muchos!