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It's supposed to explain that later. Basically what the lake means to both of them. But thank you! Tres bien mlle JC. Thats got to be the best review you've ...

falling on his soul like tears on a mirror. pretty words, but they don't make much sense. What are tears on a mirror like? Reflected, double, clear, not seen? And ...

I wanted to see this one, but now I have to wait to but it for that. I've heard it was really good! [offtopic]Yeah, secret window was awesome! [/offtopic] -JC

hehe, that's awesome! lis. I figure since I'm here, I should finish this!!!! :idea: =suggestion :arrow: =edit :?: =clarity :!: =opinion Red= grammer fix no sign [of] life in them. ...

She looked troubled and was the definition of trouble. this phrasing was a bit awkward. Consider removing one of the troubles...or just chagning the sentence to something else. His teeth ...

I hope there's some more origionality to this part. I'm taking it out of the norm now. =D I hope you like it! -JC __________________________ I woke up while it ...

JC is intrigued, she walks in. Unfortunantly she doesn't know what to do, so she just stands off in a corner by herself...

7/10 It looks cool, like some fantasy thing...though I have no clue what it actually is...hehe

hehe, thanks Shadow! Honestly I'm kinda relived that the chapters will be somewhat normal now too! hehe. Once again, thanks for reading! -JC

This is a picture from the band banquet...and I don't have photo editing things...I can just do things like mess with color and contrast and add text...nothing really cool though... ...

Okay, so earlier I read chapters one and two, and them had this really nice critique for them, but then I lost it...stupid faulty internet. Anyways, so I can't seem ...

I actually noticed the whole teen drama thing as well. I'm going to tone down the rest of the story to what I absolutely need =D Thanks. -JC

Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 30:4 -The Verdict The room was abnormally silent. Even the typewriter made no noise. Amber was in her usual seat behind Jamie and Tammy. Across ...

Yeah, it's just a move. But to a different city and a different school. Which for band people is a huge deal. More about that will be added later =D ...

Thanks to those of you who read part one. Here's part two. (this is still chapter one.) I held the soda in my mouth, letting it’s cold fizziness burn my ...