JC

awww, so many nice comments =D makes me happy! hehe. Thanks!

hehe, those were all really cool =D I just wish I knew what they were for... =D

This was good, what genre would you place it in?

Just a picture I messed with. And that's my quote...so...yeah. Don't judge me too harshly.

I loved the key in the door, it reminded me of my grandma's house. She had doors like that. The only one that didn't pop out at me as amazing ...

hehe, I know that feeling. =D

Finish: hehe, I finally got the time to finish this =D! Okay, so...here we go. Four more hours until he got home Technically if he lives in the white house ...

aha. I like this, though I can only judge by the style and use of description/other fancy things. You did well, though only time can tell when the real story ...

great job! I can't do half as well at second person, many congradulations!!!!! -JC

Could you do me a favor? (this would also work in your favor as well, you would get more critiques this way) Could you please separate all of the chapters ...

RED= Fix "Since no one was hurt, can you please sign thes relase?" [asked Sam to Jake Fray's parents.] awkward phrasing, consider changing to "Sam asked Jake Fray's parents," or ...

To the second set of stars... One clipped Jack's shoulder, jerking it forward, pulling him back to the ground. Techinicality says that he wouldn't be pulled to the ground, so ...

Part Two: This section was good, only there wasn't enough action in it for me. Just a girl freezing to death. Plot and Stlye: I like how the story is ...

Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 34 -Voices The thoughts tumble in and out of my mind. What is going to happen? When will it be over? Will I ever be ...

:!: Contains adult themes. Rated PG-13. Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 30:3 -Tammy -On Both Accounts Jamie drove herself to court that day, Tammy had arrived earlier. Amber was waiting ...