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We used to be so perfect. A lot of people would call it love. I just called it trust. Then something happened along the way that put an end to ...

hehe, I saw it at 11:40 last night, and was up until like, 2:30! So ooo! I just did! hehe. It's like, two midnight showings in a row!...only the first ...

Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 32 (still) -Promise -To Tell All -And all shall be told -On Both Accounts “I’m so sorry Jamie,” Tammy said, wiping off her face with ...

I don't really know if I like it, or if I just don't care to like it. Meaning: I didn't develop any feelings for Mary. The problem was that, if ...

The shock of the it made my head jerk up off of the pillow. The second 'the' shouldn't be there. Monday mornings are always a surprise, as if we never ...

Okay, POD is now returning to YWS! I just posted chapter 32 cont. yay!

:!: Here you go Meeves =D this one's for you! hehe. Enjoy! :!: Chapter 32 continued -Promise -To Tell All They walked into the smell of fresh ice cream and ...

I've been meaning to read this for a while now, the title would just not leave my mind. So finally I read it. I was impressed, it was very good, ...

How to fix: Click on edit. Manually delete double spacing, except for between paragraphs. It might seem tedious at first, but you'll find so many more people reading it if ...

Well, this was a kind of spur of the moment thing I thought of. I'm fairly certain that's all there is going to be of it, but I might decide ...

You really like suspence don't you? You do it well, so that's a good thing =D As with chapter four, this one showed a lot more emotion to the characters. ...

Marge followed like a Jack Russell desperate for adventure. Who's Marge? "Where is she?!" I yelled. How stupid is this woman? Going back to what I've said in an earlier ...

Okay, I get it. The bold at the top is the narrator. Adam is right, you should use the *** instead of such short chaters. Imagine your story in print. ...

I can see where you would find this flimsy...and it's not so much that, as it is inconstant. You kept switching tenses. One sentence you were saying was, the next ...

She was staring at space with wide eyes, and didn't seem to notice the rain outside. The comma in there kinda stops the sentence...it's a weird brake you could do ...