JC

Some things eat away at us, constantly devouring us to the very core. Will of mind or strength of soul isn’t enough to be rid of these demons. You need ...

Lacey- that was the end...I have to finish the book I'm writing, but when I do that, I might continue this or something. Depends. By the way, Welcome.

Note: I am by no means a poet...nor do I write, or in some case understnd poetry. This is the only poem I've ever written, and I'm taking a big ...

End I woke up the next morning with my limbs shaking. I was sore. Everywhere. The memory of yesterday was so vivid in my mind that I don’t remember how ...

That's good, but you should include some colors at least, just so that the reader knows they should be invisioning it. Or something.

Don't you hate it when there are different spellings of the same words and each of them has a different meaning? Especially when you don't know the difference between them. ...

It's more about sentence variation, say 'I' as much as you need to in order to keep the reader in check. It's the same as third person, don't say the ...

This is just as good as the first part. Actually, better. Your character's have more to them than in the first section, I feel like they're real, not just names ...

I don't have much to critique here, other than that the part where she was at home seemed a little rushed. Other than that, it was really good. I'm gonna ...

“Cor, you have natural curls, look at them!” He exclaimed to my mother, wrapping one of my curls around his little finger One- Who is Cor? Two- This didn't make ...

And Rock and Roll “Dammit!” I exclaimed, moving my hair out of the line of fire. Rick continued laughing. “This is all your fault you know,” I said. “No it ...

IT WORKED!!! Of course I had to mess with the file, and reformat it like I feared, but it worked!!! So I'm happy now! POD should be returning shortly. I'm ...

Wow...that's extensive...

I wish I understood anything about poetry...seeing as I don't though... yeah...I don't get it...sounds sad.

HI CLAIRE!!! hehe. (I'n beckie, by the way...) hehe, now you get to be known as the one that let the world know my name...*shakes head...* hehe. Anywho, you know ...