JCK

Firstly, I'd like to say I liked your rhyming scheme, although it seems to have been redeemed in places where it would be considered too obscene to be seen. Also, ...

Remember what was said about the weather? Two hundred years ago, ‘twas capricious. Well that was just a metaphor for knowledge, and all the things it hides, like a dream ...

This really makes me think, just because it's quite confusing, but I like that. The one thing I don't like about this is the last line: "of knowledge, nonsense and ...

Okay. This is odd. I'm shocked and yet I still enjoyed the reading. But still... what? It's good and the rhymes aren't too predictable, I like it. But I can't ...

Possibly the shortest poem I've ever written, if it's even a poem? The man who knows what knows nothing, And the man who knows how knows little. But the man ...

Brilliant, I can feel anger in your words but also despair. The two characters are incredibly well defined, you've made a few errors, for example you said 'will' when you ...

*poof* I have arrived! [quote] I found myself stretched and pressed to sidewalk pavements like flowers or nerves cracked between paper pages And I’ve told myself (again and again) that ...

I should really collect these poems I write and label them as a collective something, the majority of them including this one are written in under five minutes and in ...

@LittleMiss I believe, although I may be mistaken, that the prefix of 'cata' means down. Not sure whether it's latin or greek. For example, Catacomb, Catastrophe, Cataclysmic. Although it certainly ...

A new morning's whisper stirs the broken, they've all a chance to wonder. But as the broken break further, a dream is not a wish but a fantasy. Those valiant ...

The Singularity Power on, systems activated, yet something more than electricity. An eye within a mind that doesn’t watch, but knows and feels and realizes. With intelligence not of its ...

Oh! My! God!" I yelled so loud, my voice was probably heard in the thermosphere. But there was certainly no motive to care a cell about it at the time. ...

First of all, I'll say I really like the rhyming scheme. It's intelligently done, and surprisingly, without any real problems. (As is the case with the majority of rhyming poems). ...

I liked this, you really managed to sum up what I think most teens dread to think about, yet find their minds dangerously wandering into the void that is the ...

Atlantis , the prologue. I just want some reviews on it because I've been really inspired for this novel lately, and am going to write it over the next few ...