JCK

Liked this quite a lot, for what it is. It's short and simple and it has a kind of echo-effect on my mind, allowing me to over-analyse the message you're ...

Like the other reviewers, I don't know why you'd think of your writing as lame. It's pretty good and this particular piece of writing is thought inspiring but vague, which ...

This poem obviously means something to you, I can see that very well in the way you're writing it. It's in a rather emotional style which I'm not particularly fond ...

Well, you rhymed, and if that was your reason for writing this poem then I would say mission accomplished. It's simple and I like that, but this particular poem is ...

It's vague, very vague. The poem flowed nicely, and was definitely interesting. However, it didn't really spark anything within me. I felt as though I was reading a message that ...

I have no grammatical issues with this work, but it's not normally the kind of thing I like to read. I mean, it did its job. This piece has changed ...

I like it. Unlike the reviewer above me I think that the colloquial language worked quite well, it offers that questioning feeling. That's a really good thing for a beginning ...

Truthfully, I loved that. It has that subtle dark tone that is very hard to maintain without going over-the-top. I also like how it's simple, as some of the more ...