JJxVoodo

Thanks Hockeyfan87. I will change it on my computer copy. I have been told about the numbers are supposed to be spelt out but some things just never stick! Thank-you ...

Hi Calli, I am never sure about run on sentences, I have asked my teacher about them but I never really understand them. I write more how I speak than ...

I loved this loads The only thing I can pick at is A glistening angel ,upon the snow; other than that it's great Keep writing- good luck JJxVoodo

I liked this. Most people I know always badmouth the scouts so it's nice to hear someone that is speaking up about this certain sterotype. I think this piece has ...

This was good. I liked the very end of it. I think you have great potential as a poet and should keep on doing what you are doing Keep writing- ...

This was brilliant. I really liked it. I can't wait to see where this story is taken. I want to know more about this mysterious Nazi character from the ally. ...

Excelent. It was great. I got the plot quite quickly and you can feel emotion inside. You have great potential to become a great writer Keep writing- good luck JJxVoodo

Loved it. Your rhythm was excellent. I understood the plot instantly and I think you have true potential. Keep writing- good luck JJxVoodo

Hey, the title really grabbed me in but I am not sure of the plot. It all seems a bit confussing. It might be just me but I have no ...

Hey, I loved this. It was really great. I personally think you have mountains of potential. Keep writing- good luck JJxVoodo

I didn't get what you were saying really. I liked it in a strange way but I didn't understand half the words in there. Maybe you should have a bit ...

God yeah! Keep it up! It sounds epic! Please keep writing it. I want to know so much more. Please keep writing it. Please keep writing- good luck JJxVoodo

Hey, in not too long this stuff about the brothers and the dream will make sence. You will start to get a feel about why I put the dream in ...

Hey, thank-you to everyone that replyed. Don't worry, there is more to the realationship between Miranda and Leanne than I have said, you are going to have to keep reading ...

Hey. i thought this was brill. I can just feel the emotion in this piece. I don't think I have any critisisms about this. It was beautifully written. Keep writing-good ...