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JParks

  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: what goes in her head

    Hi!! So basically I thought the idea of this writing and the creativity of it was it's best qualities and totally brought the writing to life. I think that you're ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Teal Ribbon

    YEOOOOO Wow this was kind of epic. Like It was a cross between like some sort of creepy story about a weird guardian and a serious love story like yeah. ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Angel of War

    Hii!!! So basically I just wanted to say that the sort of feel I guess that's totally emanating from this piece is super. Like the way that it gives a ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: Experiment 015

    Hi!!! Wow I think this piece of work here is amazing. So basically, even though I have a lot of reasons, my main ones are how you totally leave the ...

    Jul 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Legacy of Bob- The Fair Maiden

    WOW this was insane I can't stop laughing at this. I mean to be honest this writing here just totally upped my vibe with all the humor woven between the ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Humor Re: Her time of the month

    WOW...This story just totally took a different route than I thought it was going. Even so, I really liked how you transitioned this story from an average PMS experience into ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Horror Re: Seth

    Story Seems really cool and nice. I really liked the way how you transitioned from one part to the next. Maybe you could build to the ending though cause It ...

    Jun 7, 2014


When a body moves, it's the most revealing thing. Dance for me a minute, and I'll tell you who you are.
— Mikhail Baryshnikov