JabberHut

It's been a long time, but here we are! Chapter 4! Reviews are highly welcome! Chapter 4 “What do you think, m’lady? Good?” Diana sat in front of the mirror ...

Hey, all! Thanks for the crits! More are welcome. ^_^ EERC--I know the ending's confusing. I was confused when I woke up. :P Thanks for reading it. ^_^ Reakeda--Thanks for ...

A whole year? I’ve been here an entire year! There’s so much I can say! However, this will be one post that I’ll keep to a minimum length. ^_^ Nate: ...

Hello, Alice. ^_^ This was very good. I didn't read the first to stories and I thought it was good. The ending was very abrupt. A little more drama, more ...

I am back at your request! Actually, I would've sent a PM, but there's a couple typos I'd like to point out. :P When the light touches the peak of ...

Greetings, Ash! Let's see how much story I can tear up here...:wink: I looked down at my papers that were covered in a warm glow from the candle next to ...

Hello, Z! It's been a while, so we'll see how much I remember. Just then, two of the five policemen were brutally shot down by streams of red laser bullets. ...

Hello! Here to critique upon request and desire. ^_^ The first thing I noticed was how uncomfortable it was. Right away, you start with a pronoun. That's not good. I ...

Thanks a lot to you too, Crystal. ^_^ Your reviews mean a lot to me too. *hugs* I'm glad you both enjoy my work (well, at least you're reading it ...

Hi! Here to tear your story apart. ^_^ The touch of cold metal reassured her that whatever these men had in store for a lovely young women foolish enough to ...

Hi! Here to tear up your poem, though there isn't much to tear up. ^_^ To cry, without crying- not one, single tear. That hyphen in there threw me off. ...

Hi Pendragon! ^_^ Thought I'd stop by and take a peek. I didn't read the old version at the top, btw. I'm just jumping down here. I hope you don't ...

Hiya! ^_^ I'm trying to get back into the habit of critting, so I'm more than happy to crit if you need anything critiqued. ^_^ I’m usually a grammar nut ...

Hello! You don't know me, but I'm willing to help you improve. If I say anything harsh, PM me please. I don't mean to be mean at all. I only ...

I want to just hug you, Kitty! Your reviews are amazing! You would think I'd learn. ^_~ Oh, what am I saying? *hugs Kitty tightly* I always knew kitties were ...