JabberHut

Hello again, AJ! So I actually liked what you were doing with the verses here. In fact, the first verse was actually really awesome. It certainly tied in with the ...

Hi, AJ! I like how well you portrayed the voice here. There is definitely a serious sense of paranoia. And it definitely gave me the willies in some of those ...

Hi, Star! :D I feel this has some good moments. It's certainly an understandable voice, so the reader can relate to it enough. The story is told through all the ...

Hello again, Street! I'm not sure this is a song again. Maybe lyrics poetry.... But I know nothing about poetry, so who am I to judge? lol. I'll review it ...

Hi, Dancer! So this is really just... awesome. It kinda really is. A lot of songs are in 4/4, so it's an extremely fun discovery running into a 3/4 song ...

Hey, Amarii! Interesting piece. It tells the story very well, and it gives us a very nice glimpse into the speaker's character. It's pretty simple, too, and the listener can ...

Hi, Dasia! Awww. I find this is one of your better pieces of the ones I read today, anyway. I liked it! I liked some of the references to the ...

Hello again, Carlito! You're just so awesome at lyrics. The rhythm, the words, the flow... it's just always so good. You're awesome! Oh, dear. I fear this review will be ...

Hey there, Kookies! I'm not sure this is a song. I'm wondering if you had meant poetry? I'm sorry if I misinterpreted, but I'm going to review this as a ...

Hi, alabaster! You have an interesting piece here. The last verse I thought was most interesting. It was a cool ending to this sort of song -- rather suspenseful. Or ...

Hi, SparkleDoubt! You say this is a Christian song, but I think it can totes be taken as a generic song, too. In the end, it's encouraging. It provides hope ...

Hey, Vampire! I'm rather impressed with how this song was done. There were certainly a bunch of modern references that made it much more enjoyable for the reader/listener. You've a ...

So! Hi, Dasia! :D I think that's meant to say "parody" in the title? But I don't know know the song (or whatever it may be) is, so I'm just ...

Hi, CStar! This is cute, and I can certainly relate to it as the audience. However, I do think this song is a bit contradictory between verses, and so I ...

SPARKLEDOUBT! This is a very beautiful song. As an older sister, I totes understand your side of this story. It's hard having to let them out sometimes, but they're about ...