JabberHut

Hi, Telle! This song was very cute! You definitely had some giddy emotion in there with the imagery and tone. In fact, if I got the impression of your story ...

Hey, Still! I'm back! :D I'm actually curious about your style! It's a bit unique from what I've seen. Do you, perhaps, have some examples of songs/music that would best ...

Hi, Dasia! So my thoughts are a bit backwards here compared to the usual! I feel like your message is VERY clear here. There's just a lack of imagery and... ...

Hi, Still! You've got some good moments here that work very well. That is, the flow is very nice! It's well-put together. :D Doesn't matter how much you give, someone ...

Back again, Allinall! :D So the first thought that came to mind as soon as I finished was, "That's it?!" I wanted more! XD I felt unsatisfied with the story ...

Hi, Dasia! You've been cranking these out like there's no tomorrow! There seems to be trend in that I'm, again, not as impressed as I am with some of your ...

Hi, allinall! You've got a very interesting piece here! In fact, in a depressing way, it's very beautiful. You've got a lot of good things in here -- lots of ...

Hi, Dasia! This certainly isn't one of your best works, and I think there was some contradiction here and there that I'll point out. HOWEVER, I think you've got some ...

Hi, Mikster! I don't know French (I assume it's French, anyway. XD), so I won't be of as much use as you probably would like, but I can totes work ...

Here as I said I would be! I'll apologize ahead of time though since I'm not much of a poet, and thus, I probably have no idea what I'm saying ...

Hi, Mistie! :D I find you have a very nice idea. In fact, it has a lot of potential. It's an interesting concept. Usually, you find stories like these to ...

Hey, Dasia! I don't have much to add on this song. I think it's very simple and nice, really! Simplicity can be very good, and I think your song benefits ...

Hello again, Dasia! I like where this song is going! The story is there, and we have some very nice imagery and details given to us to help flesh out ...

Hello again, Dasia! This is a cute song, and I could relate to it as a listener. I know where it's coming from, so that's always a good sign! ;) ...

Hi, Dasia! Back again! I really liked this song. It's one of the better ones you've written, I think! The chorus is by far my favorite part. When I first ...