JabberHut

Back again! :D This time around, I'm going to give you a line-by-line with every piece of advice I can give alone with links to articles that I think you ...

Hello! Sorry it's so late. I kept getting distracted. XD So what I want to say has been pretty much said. I don't know what else I can do besides ...

Galeeerius! stampedes through the tenement - rickety huts - and ignores the shouts from the guards, Is that what you think of me? Rickety ? D: So I'm gonna make ...

Hiya, Connie! I'm here after a gazillion years! :D So I'm with June in that it's hard critiquing a piece that seems great to me. XD Bear with me while ...

Hey there! I'm finally here. :D Okay, so I read this and I found it a good story. ^_^ However, it doesn't seem...poetic. I'll go over some points. I'll try ...

Hey, Shia! :D I'm glad to be of service here. I haven't reviewed lyrics in ages, and since my reviews have been kind of sad everywhere else, my review will ...

Hyello, Evi dearie! :D To answer your question in your request, your style seemed just fine! You had me hooked, you had me read more and more, you had me ...

Connie! ^^ Sorry for the wait and brief ten-minute nap. XD It's nothing against you. The previous crit drained my eyes though. Haven't done this in a while! T.T First ...

Galeeerius! Oh, boy. Your pieces are always a challenge to review 'cause they're so different! But I'll give it the ol' college try. ^_^ It sounds like you were talking ...

Hi, JC! Sorry for the wait. I wasn't home at all Friday, and Thursday got too chaotic; therefore, I'm gonna procrastinate today. ^_^ Introduction I think your intro is a ...

Rosey! =D Sorry for the delay. ^^; I went to school a couple days ago, and plop goes the homework into my lap. It was intense. oO I'm sorry I ...

Galeeerius! I'm here. Sorry for the wait. ^^ The night you asked for the critique, I had an enormous pile of homework that lasted me through the night. I've never ...

My sweet, fair child, what has become of you? You have collapsed into my hands once again, [period instead] but, my child, who are you? You bleak, pale creature of ...

Hello again, Connie Bonnie! ^_^ Grammar and First Impressions Beneath six feet of cold earth, encased in a well-crafted box, she slept; never wake to the mortal world again. That's ...

Hey, Connie! It's been a while. ^_^ Grammar and First Impressions I was the brother of Uriel in the pantheon in the world. But I haven’t been called by those ...