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Re: If I Had One Wish
This really hits home for me. I feel the same way a lot of the time. In fact, it's so accurate could you be my long lost twin? Yes a ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: Memories: Chapter 1
Brief brief brief. It's good, much like your prologue, but I need something, something concrete. You have no foundation to it. Plot, I need a plot. Let me say that ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Memories: Prologue
You have grabbed my interest. I think that's something all authors like to hear right? Any way, I feel you can really expand on this which is good, but I ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: eye for an eye
Potential, I do see a lot of potential here. As stated above it does feel like a raw copy. Now I have something to add to what the one above ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: As roses burned.
Have to say I enjoyed It very much. A lot of feeling in this, and good imagery was used as well. I really only have one thing to point out. ...
Jan 22, 2010