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OK thanks.

OK, this is just an idea that popped into my head one night, so even I don't think it's all that great. I wanted to see if people think I ...

OK, I liked it, you have a lot of detail, but in the beginning, the tree scene, that was kind of confusing. I think you need to explain that better. ...

Well, I guess all the nit-pick grammar is out of the way, so I won't repeat that. I liked it, it's very well detailed. As for what Midnightwolf said, I ...

OK, thanks, now I can finally start. :)

OK, I'm writing a story, and it has a lot to do with the main character's traumatized past. I guess It's basically an opinion thing, but should I start off ...

Okay, thanks for the critique everyone. I'm working on part 2 now.

Thanks everyone. By the way, I like your picture Ali.

ok, thanks

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I'm writing a horror story, and I need a love note as a huge part of it. Unfortunately, I'm clueless about romance and I have no idea what it should ...

Thanks everyone, I'll keep this in mind when I rewrite. Ali, I would tell what the note says, but I don't know myself. I'm no good in the romance area, ...

A sharp cry of pain could barely be heard over the loud crack of gunshot. Like a scene from a movie, a young teenage boy clutched his bloodied chest and ...

OK, I edited it. Thanks.

I edited that and wrote more, thanks for the critique.