Jamie_rocks

So even if you have a 4000 word chapter, you're supposed to post it in the other forums and expect people to be willing to critique it. You can only ...

Hahaha. That's a col idea. I might atually write that. :D I disagree about that Ali. If the song is abotu drug use then why did the Solomon elementary 4th ...

Uh yeah I got a question: why is my post locked? I didn't do that. Is that something that randomly happens for some reason?

comments in red The air was cold and muggy. Everytime Should be "Every time..." she took a breath it felt stiff and thick. The rain fell down around her , ...

Hmm, 8/10. I think it definitely sounds as though it could be good, and you have some interesting scenarios. It doesn't seem terribly mind-grabbing as it is though; you would ...

It's very short, but I want to keep track of it, so I'm posting it here. No remarks on how short it is, please. I've written it about five times, ...

It's very short, but I want to keep track of it, so I'm posting it here. No remarks on how short it is, please. I've written it about five times, ...

Okay, I've edited it, here's the revised version.

Banned for loving Rascal Flatts when he is clearly too awesome to be loved by you.

Chapter 5: Things get a little complicated. Comments in red A week passed by. High school was no more the perfect fantasized dream I thought it was. Home work was ...

I know this post was immediate. And it might not be my best since I wrote it in, like, five soon as I get enough reviews on this and the ...

Wow I missed a lot. Sorry for the delay guys, I'll get started right now.

No way man. Then I couldn't watch Saw, or any of those other awesome gore movies. Wow Rubberduck, your avatar is HILARIOUS. Where'd you get it? TPBM is a middle ...

Well, don't I feel stupid...

Um, your middle name is Srilanka! Yea, my name is EXTREMELY obvious, so I swear I'll shoot anyone who gets it wrong. Just kidding.