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Hi! 1. Paragraphs P1 I liked the introduction paragraph. It's the type of thing that intruges people. Plus it has to do with dark so I'm up for it :) ...

A/N: It's a little slow at first but the juicy parts are coming soon. MAJOR foreshadowing in the Prolouge. Like really MAJOR!! :) Prolouge She was never smarter. I could ...

It's ok, I guess you guys are all authors in this story and I shouldn't hold you out from the full plot :)

I liked this....mayvbe this chapter should be called Demon in the Closet since it's such a cliche now and days for a little kid to think there are monsters in ...

What happened to this?

I think that this was great. Only problem I found was that instead of captivating me like it would in other chapters, the great description of the scenery confused me ...

Oh okzy thanks! Because it seemed like everyone was in a big loop :-)

I claim a spot, a girl

Is it too late to join?

OTHER than the fact that the dolphins somehoe managed to live and Carrie Underwood grew gills and lived with them in Lava Lake forever! :))))) (looks like a fat guy ...

Yupp it's in 2038 when WW3 is happening...I do mean holovision and sure you can use it!

You know you're obsessed with YWS when you stay up late during semester finals weeks. IN fact tomorrow I have my math final exam. Whoopee! *In a sarcastic depressed tone* ...

'xept for Shiloh cus she's cool like that. She and her army of Twilighters created mankind again....with a lot of incest but thats not he point. THEN SUDDENLY!! History repeat ...

lye in the fourth line after her 13th bday should be lay. I really liked it again. Post more up in now....yeah like NOW! I want to see where this ...

When your on until 4am, waiting for someone to review your work or update a storybook. When you find yourselves closing Facebook and Aim and opening YWS (at least for ...