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Hey, Welcome to YWS! How are you liking it so far? I love it here! :) This was good and if this was the result of boredom, then you're a ...

Hey, First of all welcome to YWS! Second, please rate this. We don't want the little kiddies accidentally reading this :). Now on to the review, I may warn you ...

I like this. I thought you were at first speaking as a child whose mother is battling depression or something, then I saw "tail wag one more time' and I ...

Wow. I'm about to cry. I'm sorry for your loss, of your sister, friend, cousin. Sorry. :( This was really good. :) You have good, I don't know how to ...

I think I get this. Your uncle was a maniac-depressive, who after years of selling his t-shirts, "Captain Coconut" ended up dying. I'm sorry about that, if I'm right. =_( ...

I like this. As Griff said, you don't have much structure here and it's a bit hard on the eyes to read, but if you get past the format you ...

Again, it's amazing! :) I like your idea of just giving a taster, it leaves us begging for more. The dialouge is believable and the story moves at a good ...

Oh my god. Wow. I am amazed. To be honest, I thought this would be a typical teenage boring story, where Seth is either her jerkface boyfriend who she will ...

Hey there. I see this as a vampire story. Please God, don't tell me it's a vampire book. If it's not then HUZZAH :). So far, it seems that a ...

Hey, I thought I'd check this out because I liked the title :). Since you already got the grammar done by other reviewers I'll just give you my opinion on ...

Hey, I liked this, it had the sweet romance fluff feel. I burst out laughing when I read that he pushed her into the lake and then she pulled him ...

Hey, Well, this is MUCH better than the last version of it "Lies of the Pretty Girls' but I still feel it's just another version of it. The writing is ...

Hey, First of all, I love your avvie :) Now, to the review. This was a good poem but during it, I felt like the narrator was the secret. I ...

Hey, So this chapter was a bit of a dissapointment to me. Chapters are supposed to further the story but the only advancement this chapter made was this Ryan person ...