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Re: BOW DOWN BEFORE ME MORTALS!
OK, you're very much welcome here because people here are random proffs, whut? HAHAHA... WELCOME! Hope you enjoy your time at this site. :D It's more fun than parentheses.
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Kiss Me, before I Die
I'm kind of a sucker for a story about holocaust... I'll try to get to this... if you want. :) I've read Night, Number the Stars, Mad Desire to Dance, ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
First off, I think the story itself is touching and sweet, but a little unbelievable, mostly regarding Andy. I realize we don't know much about him, since our knowledge is ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
....Okay, pretend you're a police officer now. A young, thirteen year old girl runs into the station, she's yelling frantically, she has cuts and bruises, and I assume she'd be ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
Thanks, Inbetweener! :)
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Hi, Miss kitty with the pretty avatars and pretty violet stars, May you please review this? MY YWLJ SUBMISSION [SHORT STORY] Thanks a bunch! :D
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Dine at the 'Review Restaurant' [OPEN]
I'm doing you a favor by posting here: KAKA, dear...review please? :) MY YWLJ SUBMISSION [SHORT STORY] Thanks!
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: The Review Bin
Ish, since you've turned down my previous request (you're weak! hahaha...kidding. I know, I'm the one to be was too long really.... and boring zzzzz) okay... So, my dearest Isha-ish... ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)
Hi, missy. this is my first time to ask from you. :)) MY YWLJ SUBMISSION [SHORT STORY] Thanks very much!
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
Picture: Some explanation (PLEASE READ): OK, so this's what I'd submitted to the Young Writers Literary Journal. I wrote this last week, hoping that I'd make it before the deadline. ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Love Story chapter 1: Just the Begining
I'm finally here deary. :) COLOR CODE: NITPICKS | ADDED | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION Nitpick #1 FORMATTING Bold and italics Who calls at 7 in the morning? I thought. ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Old
Hey Skinso, as you've requested. I'm here in a jiffy. LOL But I was already thinking of reviewing this since yesterday, nuh... I just didn't get to linger with the ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: My guardian dog (Edited!) OLD
Hey, mom. I'm here for a review. :D COLOR CODE: NITPICKS | ADDED | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION Nitpick #1 I wasn’t always this jaded but working nightshift in a ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 5)
If you have any questions regarding the short review, and if you ever need a review again, just drop by my wall. :)
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 5)
Hey, Skinso. I'm back and making it up for being oh so long gone. HAHA... OK, so as I expected, I wouldn't have anything to nitpick. I wouldn't have to ...
Feb 4, 2011