JayBe

I really don't know what to think about this story. haha It made me laugh thats for sure. I noticed that you described Nathan but you never described the person ...

I loved how it starts out suspensful. It really draws the reader in and your fisrt paragraph was excellent! The one thing I want to know is what are his ...

Alright, my first review or whatever you would like to call it. :D I really liked it, but the 1st chapter lacked some details and it was kind of short. ...