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Hiya! ^_^ I for one did not know a lot about Japanese fashion, this essay was very informative and well written. Anyone who would like too know about this subject ...

Hiya ^_^ Best thing I've read all day! Positively flows from the very beginning, I love the subject matter. I'm not even sure if I would change a single thing. ...

Hiya ^_^ I enjoyed this a lot, it's a style I've never seen. I am not a punctuation master by any means, my style is actually the less the better. ...

Hiya ^_^ I'm very intrigued by people actually talking in the poem, it's not something i've dabbled in. I love the use of italics as well, I tend to see ...

Hiya ^_^ First of all I just love the word dismay so and instant like earned. That may just be the Apocalypse when a comic book move wins! "Nickelback made ...

I'll always remember the 4th of September as it's my birthday and happens before this sad day. The beginning just set a great mood for the poem. I imagine you ...

Spaces! woot! It was at that time in my life when the things I most feared came to me even in slumber. I'd like too know what time this was. ...

Hiya ^_^ The mystery is Terry I assume, I wish I had a better description of him. My style of reviewing is not to pick apart your writing, I like ...

I'm not one to talk alot on this matter but you may benefit more than I would from writing in stanzas. I could be numb, I could be hopeless is ...

Hiya ^_^ I'm interested in seeing how this pans out. I've dabbled in writing stories that take place in a dairy. You are free to write however you like, punctuation ...

Although, the sentence problems from chapter one made it to chapter 2, I love the idea of this story. It is interesting, original, and fun. I'm going to be taking ...

Hiya ^_^ Thoughts now this is an interesting thing to write a poem about A few mistakes here and there but I make tons of them also Only one that ...

Hiya :3 I love the subject of this poem The Black Rose I cannot decide which line is my favorite The cheerful nature and all that might or Denying to ...

JC here I like how you made everything rhyme, I would love too see you break out of the rhyming schemes though. I am a free poet often times do ...

Thanks for your review ^_^ I love the way this poem makes me feel The ones we love will always be near Family is the most important thing we have ...