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JemimaPuddleDuck

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Pretense of Nature

    beautiful

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: poem

    I like your idea, but you need some description and imagery. Make it seem more natural and subtle :-)

    Jun 24, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: By a magic tree, we stood and hoped.

    I like it - but could you make some lines a little shorter for dramatic effect? just a suggestion

    Jun 12, 2009


For according to the trollish philosopher Plateau, "if you wants to understan' an enemy, you gotta walk a mile in his shoes. Den, if he's still your enemy, at least you're a mile away and he's got no shoes."
— A Blink of the Screen by Terry Pratchett