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  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: When Noah met Kaeden

    Thank you for the thoughtful review, Lavvie! I appreciate it so much. I'll definitely take what you said into consideration and apply it to the next chapter. I'm going to ...

    Sep 19, 2018
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: When Noah met Kaeden

    Thank you! And I'm definitely planning on it.

    Sep 16, 2018
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: When Noah met Kaeden

    Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :)

    Sep 16, 2018
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: When Noah met Kaeden

    I"m so glad you liked it! Thank you. re imagery: Yes! This struck me later on. I was so occupied with writing their interaction, I didn't really take the time ...

    Sep 16, 2018


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling