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Hey Dark Magik. :) I've met you in the chatroom. Is there something shorter we can call you? I love all of your favorite movies! Especially Howl's Moving Castle. *points ...

Hey! Thanks a lot for double spacing everything. :) “I told you not to fail, Sykin. Did I not make the message clear enough?” Achilles’ voice was low and dangerous ...

Congrats! That's really cool. Of all the places you've sent your query letter, which one do you like the best?

Hey, paper-kimono. :) Welcome to YWS! Please review two things by other people for each story/poem you post. You'll get more critiques that way, too. She is lucky. And she ...

This would be a lot easier to read if you double spaced the dialogue and paragraphs instead of having it all in a clump. About your story, show me, don't ...

Sounds like Bradley. Her parents teach yoga, and own a organic food store. To rebel, she bought a bunch of piercing that she's now regretting. Wants to be a lawyer. ...

A quiet, country girl with long legs and braids, who thinks about the meaning of life while sitting on the porch. Sensuret

Granted, but they've forgot the meaning of 'weekend' and you now have to go to class on Saturday and Sunday too. I wish I had a team of robots I ...

Granted, but it's because your city just fell off a gigantic cliff and is now plummeting towards the center of the earth. I wish I had something really yummy to ...

Very nice! I thought it was a little too full of errors, though. I like how it reads out loud; the character's accent is funny, but the things pronounced the ...

Your friend could make an account, and post this in the historical fiction section. :)

Hey Dove! Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. What type of stuff do you write? Have a favorite genre? I like fantasy best, but that's because I'm ...

Granted, but it's that weird, gross kind that's mixed up with fake strawberry Jam. 0_0 I wish I had a ninja castle.

Moved to Fiction Discussion & Tips. :) Thanks, Cass. Chaéd is a cool word. What's it like?

Hello again! By double space your dialogue and paragraphs, I meant like this: Cassandra trudged down the stairs, just waking up. Liana was already up and about, though still in ...