Jerikas

This is good but lacks description. I noticed that in the last paragraph the character dropped his sword then decapitated someone - not sure how this is physically possible. What ...

No where. When asked where I live this is what I say. Want to know why? Because I that is where I do live. When giving directions to get to ...

Eldest was not the greatest book I have ever read. I got bored several times and had to stop and read something else. The main cause for this is probably ...

I had to read Of Mice and Men for my GCSE English in year 11 and I really liked it. I saw the film beforehand though and some of the ...

Endless road. I walk down the road every day, each time getting a little further only to be called back to the house for some reason or another. The old ...

Its really hard hitting. I like the way you keep the pattern the same, I think it adds effect and makes it easy to read so you consentrate on the ...

I liked the peom but I'm not sure what it's about :?. I'll probably understand it better if you explain it to me. I'm not very good with poetry.

I think this is a really good piece of writing and I really like the style you use. Only a few things I did notice, which are all easily changable ...