Jessa

Heyy! Here for an edit! Blue = comment Red = edit Dear Heart, I told you. I warned you. I even begged you. To stop, To stay, To wait. You ...

Heyy! Here to review your poem!! For the most part I liked it, but in the middle the flow gets a little choppy. You start out with a good flow ...

Heyy! I thought this was very creative! Well done. I love how you rhymed with the letters L. O. V. E. that added a very unique element to the poem! ...

Heyy! I'm here to review your poem! It is short, but I sence it has a deep story behind it. Here is my review... Alone, thinking of you I sat ...

Heyy! I have some edits for you. Blue = comments Red = edits Stalker, stalker, following me, outside my house, and in my tree. Binoculars are in your hand. Collect ...

Heyy! This made me laugh, but there was one part that stumped me... Happy Birthday, my child! You’re now officially a teen. And according to society , you’re rebellious and ...

You should wash your mouth out with soap for saying you are bad at poetry ;) I loved this!! It was great, although I agree this is more of a ...

Hey! I found one little typo in the thrid stanza, In a whim we'de bring them --> we'de should be we'd dancing, making the trip, Drifting like essence from our ...

Heyy! I do think this makes sense! However, I think it would be nice if you could tell us more! I am frozen as the tears stream down my face. ...

Hey! Fortunately I don't know what it feels like to hate myself, but I know what it feels like to hate someone and be hated by someone. It doesn't feel ...

Oh my gosh in loved this!!!!! I actually laughed out loud while reading it. This poem fits me (and probably a lot of other people) perfectly. Every time I open ...

Here as requested! Blue = comment Red = fix You make me smile You make me laugh You make it okay You make me want to beg you to stay ...

Here as requested! I really liked it. It was easy to visualize everything that was going on, as well as what the mother was going through. One thing.... I hadn’t ...

I must say this is written very well! I am very faithful to my religion and I love how you pointed out the simplicities of loving God and following through ...

Hey! I liked this piece a lot. The questions were sweet. I find one little part hard to understand though... But what would you say if It is I who ...