Jessa

I liked this a lot! I love the way you captured the complexity of the relationship. The rhyme you kept throughout the whole poem was good too! :] There was ...

Heyy! This was really good. It spoke to me, because I walk through the halls most days and feel like I am wearing a mask just trying to get by ...

Wow. Wow. Wow. I loved this! You did a very good job writing this and I NEED to read more :) I didn't find any major errors and I thought ...

This was great! I loved the story in the beginning and then telling people it was all a lie, brilliant! I think you would like to read this was written ...

Heyy! This is awesome! I feel like you depicted writing in a very beautiful way. Most people do not realize how much thought and effort it takes to write something. ...

Heyy! I loved this! They are questions I ask all the time! The imagery was amazing and the flow was good too. I usually don’t care for poems when they ...

Heyy! I liked it a lot! The flow was great and the rhymes did not seem too forced. It also held my attention until the very end. I didn't find ...

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Hey! I thought this was very cute! My favorite part was the ending... Because the love I have for you, Is powered by the love you have, For me. I ...

Hey! I thought this was very nice, and since everyone else already did a good joy pointing out the mistakes I will just praise your poem. :) I loved the ...

Alright, I'm here to give you your edits! There are not many, but it is going to look like a lot! Page: 2 As they did as he asked, he ...

Hey! First of all, this was amazing! The way you worded each line made me want to keep reading! I also have very vivid dreams (when I decide to go ...

Hey! I loved this! You are very good at writing poems in two minutes ;) I could easily relate to this poem, because it reminds me of some things my ...

I thought this was amazing! I loved the format. I found myself urging to read the next line. I'm sorry I did not find any edits. But the one thing ...

Hey! I really liked this poem! It was different than any other kind of poem I have ever read before. It was sweet how you used statistics to make up ...