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Jessa

  • Other » General, General Re: Prayers

    Hey Meg! I don't think you have anything to worry about. All of the voices sounded real (as someone would say them). I loved the message this piece had. Believing ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: From Life

    Very nice poem! I thought you did a very good job showing us the emotions instead of just telling them right out to us. There was one part of the ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Stars in the fallen sky

    Very nice poem! I loved how everything flowed and had a beat. Other then the changes that were already stated, I would not change a thing. My favorite part of ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: So get out

    Aww this poem made me cry. I loved it! I really like it when poems have a ton of emotion in them. My favorite part was when you were saying ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Daddy's Little Girl

    I loved this poem. It showed a lot of emotion and it was easy to relate to what you were saying. I am the oldest of three girls, so I ...

    Mar 7, 2011


That, sir, is the most frightening battlefield in the world: the blank page.
— Larry McMurtry, Comanche Moon