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Re: Prayers
Hey Meg! I don't think you have anything to worry about. All of the voices sounded real (as someone would say them). I loved the message this piece had. Believing ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: From Life
Very nice poem! I thought you did a very good job showing us the emotions instead of just telling them right out to us. There was one part of the ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Stars in the fallen sky
Very nice poem! I loved how everything flowed and had a beat. Other then the changes that were already stated, I would not change a thing. My favorite part of ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: So get out
Aww this poem made me cry. I loved it! I really like it when poems have a ton of emotion in them. My favorite part was when you were saying ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Daddy's Little Girl
I loved this poem. It showed a lot of emotion and it was easy to relate to what you were saying. I am the oldest of three girls, so I ...
Mar 7, 2011
