JessicaPhan825

This is a very lovely piece. I like how you wrote this poem out of experience. You added a lot of love and experience into this piece, that's what makes ...

This is really good. I like the way you described the storm and the sky. This poems gives a sense of sadness and fear. This poem is like a darkish ...

I totally agree. To many people these days are getting judged on by their appearance. Like how big their butts and boobs are. Why do you think all the popular ...

This piece was really good. It had a lot of repeating lines. I forgot what they were called but this poem was good. I don't get the third paragraph though. ...

Hey I really liked this piece. It was really original. I liked how you started off the beginning with a deep meaning. The best story to be told is the ...