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...And here I was thinking that I for once took the unambiguous route. There was a much more open-ended finish to the story before but I changed it. I'm not ...

Hey dudes and dudettes, this is finished! I kind of blurted it all out toward the end, I need to edit it something fierce, ha, just thought I'd let y'all ...

Don't give up on sci-fi! Science fiction needs cool writers like you :P

Hey Rosey, In the very first transition, I mention pyramids. If that isn't a big enough indication of location difference, I don't know what is. Later, I mention temple steps, ...

I haven't seen Cats or read of the Warriors series previously mentioned, or this Pendragon series either. Lol. The only cat related production I'm familiar with, that I can think ...

Yay comments! Good points, yes, and thank you for them. This is indeed about a cat, well two, but it's more about Pear to be honest. It alternates between the ...

I didn't want to clog up your thread, which is why I said PM me haha but I guess it's relevant discussion, so I'll just add that I was fine ...

I don't think there was all that much confusion, honestly. I initially thought, and the way this reads (in my opinion) is that a mercenary assassin has come to meet ...

o.O Ye gods! I wrote this nearly three years ago. And, you know, abandoned it. Sadly, as I quite enjoyed it at the time. And I still like certain elements ...

Mel, The author's views or religious belief are not in contention and are never up for critique. Fictional writing need never be a reflection of the writer's opinion. Review the ...

Hello again, I did indeed mention the hair in the last section. Also, no, it needn't be a comma after 'why'. It could be, certainly. But it's fine as is. ...

Uh, Hi Pen, thanks for your comment. I'm not sure you quite understood what was happening - or even saw the text as it is formatted - 'pickmeuppickmeuppickmeup' is already ...

Hey hey, guys, I added a little extra to this as I've been writing a fair bit today. Check it out before reading the next and final addition!

Hey all, Thanks again for commenting. I don't mind that the journal entries are confusing and fragmented because they're coming from a confused, fragmented and unstable mind - that's a ...

Hey Envy, Thanks for your comments! All good points. This is, I should mention, a short story not a novel based on chapters or anything. I'm splitting it up into ...