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Joe

  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.

    Wow you might want to have a nice big cup of tea and calm down. Better now? Good. It was a good piece, great some might say but you do ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: In the Mind of a Loon

    Hello it is joe Ahhhh... review day is almost over and this is only my second review. Oh well, it did start around 9 o'clock for me. Anyway down to ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: I need to write.

    Hello it is joe My first review of the day, its a bit late but never too late to start. Anyway great story-poem hybrid. Captures perfectly how I feel when ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Flawed

    Hellllllooooooooooooo its jooooooooooooooooooe. Awesome poem, I love the first paragraph "Face me with my flaws and tell me you see me for who I really am. Can you not see ...

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: The melancholy

    Helloooooooo its Joooooooooooe Great poem lovely in fact. I really like this part "Waiting for another year, Without shedding another tear. Singing the melancholy to myself, Awaiting the next day ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 1

    Helloooooooo Its Jooooooooooe to review your story. I love the first two sentences "When you’re young, you dream. You think that the world will be this amazing place that you’re ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: Perfectly Content

    Hey its joe here. I like story, love it in fact. To me you really capture the essence of writing very well. The whole story fells like I'm siting down ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Fly

    I really liked this piece. I thought the emotion was just fine, great actually. Something I don't understand is who's talking to the M.C. ( Main Character). Is it the ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Letters to the Merciless

    Great poem. I like the first paragraph the best "Dear Loneliness, You are my only companion nowadays. They say it’s only a phase but it never passes, They all say ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Yellow Bird

    Great poem I love the emotion and the word choice. I don't usually read romantic poems but this one was different. Its the perfect length and flow. I don't really ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: quiet demolitionist

    I like this poem. It has a nice flow and great descriptions. If I had to point out something wrong with this poem it would be the paragraph beginning with ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Savior

    I never read romantic stories. I just don't like em but this one was different, kinda dark too. First of all I just want to say that its almost all ...

    Aug 12, 2013


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind