Joe

I only have on thing to say. "My name is Inigo Montoya, you kill my father prepare to die." Anybody else love the princess bride?

Thanks!

Thanks!! This helped a lot

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Unpublish if you wouldn't mind It just takes up extra space

I absolutely agree, every red knight should have a quill.

Thanks and again welcome to YWS

Yay thanks for the great review Ahhhh I made a Typo I've failed you. I couldn't believe I had made a typo at the start but then I looked at ...

Thanks The storm is still going on actually its raining a ton. But thanks for the awesome review.

Yellow its Joe Hmmm I guess what I meant to say is that they really encouraged me to write. like the part "When I was grounded my wings seemed useless ...

Thanks! I know the first two line were bugging me too but I decided just to leave them. But since you remarked on this I will change it.

Hey thanks for the review. I actually didn't think this would get this much attention the real poem I was trying to get at was memories (thanks for the like)

Agh I hit submit by accident just a sec

Hello its Joe to the reviewing rescue

Dang you're right there were a couple more birds I would have added Owls, nighthawks kingfishers... Maybe I'll rewrite it after review day