Joeducktape

Very nicely done! The sarcasm seemed kind of unnatural. I love some of the details you put in, like Ness' hair, and the history behind it. You have a good ...

Thanks, I really didn't think about it much. It was just sort of a short little thing I wrote down real quick. I have other, much deeper stuff that I ...

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Aw, crap! My spacing didn't work! How come? I used the "pre" thing! Please Review!