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Thank you, Piggy! :D I agree - I'm going to go back and add more imagery as to what the Ruby is - and other such stuff. Sapphires are my ...

A/N - I've been away from YWS for a while - atleast in the writing section. Also, this is my first un-assigned poem I've written in a while, so give ...

O_O I totally did not catch that spelling error. >.< I agree with what you guys had to say, somewhat, and I'll try to revise it a wee' bit. Maybe ...

It was so nightmarish - Sparsile - that I couldn't see my hands in sight. I wished upon the starless night that I could sprinkle magic upon your soul - ...

The skin of my eyes divorce by light- only to make one brighter. Because it's my soul that makes it that way. It's because I see past the clouds - ...

The diamond girl was flawless, her form and gait pristine. God made her eyes from stars and seas, and stroked his jealousy. You talk of her in a way that ...

Piggy, lol. The thing with the pollen is that it's a flower. The narrator is dying, actually, lol. I could go into technicalities with the gravity and flying and smoke...but ...

Haha, thanks everyone! ^^ I'm glad you like it.

As we fly through the smoke - Our arms out-stretched - Hope - we land in the field of gravity. Floating intoxication surrounds me like bubbles - it tickles my ...

Hibi, I liked this! I loved the common-voice it had; I could relate to most of what you said. A few things, though: or getting sunshine in your eyes. This ...

In the world of wonderful things, we tend to abridge upon the wings of an everlasting notion - commotion that we the people live in motion. And by this motion ...

...Aw. That's all I can say. ^^

The piggy said to...and I thought you did too? >.> I can always change it back! (I dunno'. T.T)

Piggy: I agree with you...I'll tweak the ending a bit. ^^ thanks! Pengu: Well, I'm not too sure I want it in the present tense, but I like the very ...

The streets were an opalescent white - with fog - and never have my dreams been so shaken. To wake up from a nightmare - like this - throws us ...