Jordrake

Well, to explain Denise's repitition, I thought it made it clear that she's used to having people become averse to her due to her bold personality, and is finding it ...

Yeah, I was worried when I originally wrote it that it was a bit fast, but with any luck it didn't break the suspension of disbelief. I just didn't know ...

Thanks for the CC, youreit. I based the nerdier parts of Ben on myself, so if he's a cliched nerd, it's only because I am. I feel that your main ...

Thanks a bunch, Dreamy. I appreciate it.

Thanks ever so much for the warm welcome, you guys. I would have reviewed some other works first, but I couldn't find any works that interested me right off the ...

Thanks. I'll keep splitting in mind for future submissions.