JosephDean

First, thanks for your critiques. I do appreciate it :) Second, they're faux rhymes. They don't have to technically be exactly the same. Third, I switched to third in the ...

*Has a bad seventh grade flashback* Hatchet .... *shudder* The entire time I was just yelling at the pages, "Die already!" Also, I think it's called Tru Confessions ... about ...

Wow, I just finished it a little over an hour ago. I'm confident in saying that it was much better than Twilight. The characters were MUCH more believable, and Meyer's ...

Wow, I'm surprised that no one has reviewed this. I know it was written a while back, but anyways... “Do geraniums grow in Cairo?” “Oh please, they grow wherever.” “They ...

Lol, I just might do that. Thanks :) Maybe I should just force myself to write meaningless sentences and then go back and edit it all once I have words ...

Wow, that was really great! I'm surprised you think that you are lousy at poetry because that one flowed well enough for me :). The first sentence that took up ...

Haha, I'm always listening to music while I write, draw, etc. Odd thing is, I can write an extremely gory death scene while listening to Paramore :P So... that wouldn't ...

Thanks, you did help a bit, lol. The thing is, I have four main characters (but one is just.. .um... main-er? than the others). From my Main-Main Character, it is ...

Most of the things that I found have already been mentioned. However... ...his smooth russet skin... There should be a comma between smooth and russet. When you have multiple adjectives ...

Very interesting, indeed! A couple things that jumped out at me though. First, the obvious ones. I moved my bare soles silently across the floor of brown and green, then ...

Is it a sad thing that I'm in AP Calculus and I don't know how to do half this stuff? To be fair, I know the properties, but as Sam ...

The commas in red should be there. *nods* The "when....." part is a dependent clause and omitting the comma will create a run-on sentence. :) Tell your teacher to put ...

Haha, I loved that ending. Somewhat predictable, but very much entertaining. Allow me to state that I literally laughed out loud at the blunt use of the .. erm...... italicized ...

Well, in my seemingly neverending novel, I'm stuck at a chapter because it has to be written in a happy, somewhat joyful (but not too much) mood, but I don't ...

Thank you so much!