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Joseph George

  • Poetry » General, General Re: From a distance

    Hey DivergentDemigod, First Impressions: Cute little poem with some upfront value. Not much to review here, so I'll make it simple and short for you. Positives: The positive side of ...

    Nov 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Paradise on Earth

    Hey K4wa, First Impressions: (DISCLAIMER: Obviously I read this as if I was reading the plot outline for a book, which is exactly what this is. I figured that I ...

    Nov 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: A Love For Crime- Chapter 1

    Hey SpencerReidIsMyLife, First Impressions: Back to read the second part of your book. As with the previous section, I feel that the story has an interesting enough direction and flow, ...

    Nov 20, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the old things

    Hey Autumns, First Impressions: Wow, this is a very intense piece of literature. To be honest, at first I thought that it was just another one of those, "I hate ...

    Nov 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Spindletop

    Hey TheSilverFox, First Impressions: Definitely not your "kosher" 4x4 poem, so, props for that. I was intrigued by the uniqueness of the layout and the pattern, as well as your ...

    Nov 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: A Love For Crime- Prologue

    Hey SpencerReidIsMyLife, First Impressions: To be honest, I'm not quite sure what to think about this one, but it's mostly because it's a prologue, and those are always confusing and ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: ~Suckers~

    Hey WhosabellCanWrite, First Impressions: Well, interesting little piece. The focus has obviously not been put in the formatting and the grammar of the work, but I like the creepy build ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Heart of Man

    Hey stevebayor, First Impressions: Interesting little poem you've got here. Has kind of a pessimistic view on humanity, and a sort of degradation of who we are, which is actually ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: my heart is torn

    Hey Lylas, First Impressions: Well, it definitely classifies as a "Love Poem," no doubt about that. A little bit more on the "bluesy" side, but still classic. This seems like ...

    Nov 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dream Knitter

    Hey Dracula, First Impressions: Interesting topic that catches the eye, once you've read a few sentences in, as you realize that the title "Dream Knitter" is literal. Sort of threw ...

    Nov 15, 2016


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