JosephGeorge

Hey acm, here for a Review Day review, Positives: This is the first time I've read anything that feels like this. You've chosen such a controversial topic, death, and done ...

Hey Giselle97. here for a Review Day review, Positives: Dealing with topic and nature of your poem, the entire thing has this sort of ebbing and flowing feeling that rises ...

Hey StellaThomas, here for a Review Day review, Positives: I feel like I could cry for joy! It's been a loooooon time since I've read anything that actually has meaning ...

Hey dystopianmonkey01, here for a Review Day review, Positives: One day I took my scalpel and painted art with it, I would run them through the streets and paint the ...

Hey HollywoodUndead, here for a Review Day review, Positives: It's simple and all. I enjoyed that you just focused on moving from point a to point b, and getting to ...

Hey Mislady101, here for a Review Day review, Positives: [quite]And watch me fall My heart might break But don't weep honey I'll always return [/quite] I loved that you brought ...

Hey mavisknightely, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Your formatting is straight lined and clean, which is always good in poetry because it can be hard when it's jumbled ...

Hey sudamasri, here for a Review Day review, Positives: You've got very consistent, standard flow that's easy and fun to read because you can picture yourself singing it to a ...

Hey Dime666, back again for Review Day, Positives: I thought it was cool that you have your poem broken up into two parts, as if they were chapters, which I ...

Hey Dime666, here for a Review Day review, Positives: The over all piece feels consistent and sticks to its nature, a bit edgy here and there and overall with this ...

Hey SirLight, here for a Review Day review, First Impressions: Great free-style piece with some powerful images and painting with words going on. Positives: Under this shade of darkness, I ...

Hey ofmonstersandmen1234, here for a Review Day review, Positives: I am brought back to reality by Anthony. He asks me if I'm okay. I look at him and say, "Yes, ...

Hey AnnMath, here for a Review Day review, First Impressions: I'm always worried when I see "prologue" because they are almost never a good thing, so, we'll see. Positives: Okay, ...

Hey GrayLynx, here for a Review Day review, First Impressions: Positives: I like the fantasy concept surrounding this whole piece, and how you've pulled a lot old, but fairly original ...

Hey NightKaizer, here for a Review Day review, First Impressions: Positives: His companion, a girl with long blonde hair laced with braids and shorter antlers, elbowed him. “Get real, Kyte. ...