JosephGeorge

Hey NightKaizer, here for a Review Day review, First Impressions: (You said I should read this first, before the second part, so figured I should listen.) Positives: “A delay, maybe? ...

Hey Samk642, First Impressions: Interesting piece, and I believe I've already reviewed at least one previous chapter. Positives: Still like this concept of Guardians and such. You've got a really ...

Hey bookishminecrafter, here for a Review Day review, First Impressions: Ooh, such mysterious darkness going on. I love fantasy, and this has got one of those classic, "high-fantasy" kind of ...

Hey Casanova, here for a Review Day review, First Impressions: Positives: It feels very natural and realistic. Albeit I'm not one for "mature" stuff, but I enjoyed the style and ...

Hey AutoPilot, here for a Review Day review, First Impressions: At first I like it, but then it sort of just ended without much solid feel to it, so, not ...

Hey Squirtlepowiee, here for a Review Day review, First Impressions: Positives: The sharp, barbed blades of my choices I regret them They writhe in my stomach I liked that you ...

Hey, First Impressions: HUGE! Okay, I would seriously consider breaking this up into submissions no longer than 1000 words, if you want anyone to review your pieces on this site. ...

Hey, First Impressions: Positives: Colours that curve beside each other like equals, mocking us for our obsession with anyone black or white. So very packed with interesting ideas. This could ...

Hey, First Impressions: Cool concept, so far. And intriguing. Positives: I like the amount of effort you've put into building your characters trough conversations, and the amount of dialogue is ...

Hey outvaders, First Impressions: Definitely fits in the short story genre :D It was an interesting concept, so I enjoyed the read. Positives: You've got a cool plot that flows ...

Hey, First Impressions: Not quite sure what to think because this is only the first chapter I've read, so I wouldn't be able to say if the characters or the ...

Hey NightKaizer, First Impressions: I quite enjoyed the story, and the little chunk of banter between the two boys was a good addition. Positives: You have all of this formatted ...

Hey alliyah, First Impressions: Nice, cute little piece that has a fun ring to it, and the festive theme makes it all the better. In now way is it going ...

Hey Ivywater, First Impressions: It's nothing spectacular, but it's got an interesting feel about it. I'd stick it with "Dream Within a Dream," but of course not quite the same ...

Hey Mage, First Impressions: So, my first thought was that this is not a very poetic poem, mostly because there's not really a lot of word play or significant things ...