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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Thank you, really! I'm glad you liked it. Just a quickie question: I kept the character descriptions vague so that everyone could fill it in with their own mind's image, ...

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Thank you, really!

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Cool! The quote thing is a tiny little coding thing. You just type [quote][/quote ] without that space and put the quote you want in the middle.

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Also, do you know how to do the quote thing? Because if not, I can tell you.

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Thank you for your review, really! Thanks for all of your advice. I will definitely be following most of it. It was a rough draft I muddled through in about ...

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Thank you for all of your advice! You're right as I look back on it... way too many commas. I'll definitely take your grammatical criticisms. It seems like you... like ...

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Falling

    Thanks for the reviews, really! I appreciate your comments, really. I know you said you didn't like the ending, but the entire dream was supposed to be a metaphor for ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Thank you so much! Really. I made summer start to encroach on the other seasons to symbolize global warming. It seems like Summer, to me, just wants to fill up ...

    Apr 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Yeah, trust me, I completely get the %s and numbers. Thank you, really. I get why you'd say I used "perhaps" too many times. :D

    Apr 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Thank you, really! I'm glad you liked it. Do you think the actual writing was okay? Not the story, just the writing itself? I was wondering if you had any ...

    Apr 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Thanks, really. :D It's not a poem, but I was trying to be poetic.

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Diary Entry

    Thank you. Truly. I've never been in a situation like that, but I tried to imagine what it would be like. And then I wrote it out.

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Thank you, really! That was my goal, make them like old friends. I tried to personify them as I tend to get feelings with them, but I'm sure other interpretations ...

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Thank you so, so much! Really. Your advice is good. I think I'll keep the ending, but other stuff you mentioned I'll definitely change. I will keep admiring your work ...

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Diary Entry

    Hey! I completely get what you're saying. I think a poet means different things to different people. For example, a poet to me can invoke emotions with words, make me ...

    Apr 22, 2020


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening