JoyceSparrows

Yay classics! I LOVE them. From experience I have learned that you can indeed judge a book by its cover...

I tie the ribbon in a foolish way, Hoping you wouldn’t notice. Aimlessly I wander, Searching. I find what I seek, But I cannot have it. You glance at the ...

Hello I read the first chapter of the novel; you may have noticed my comment on it. The things I said about it still apply to this chapter. Like I ...

I wrote this story for a school assignment. It had by one of those stories that explained why something happened. It aslo had to be written in the style that ...

Hello!! First off I'd like to welcome you to YWS. Now we can get down to business. I like the concept of the story, but you have to remember that ...

Is this for Snoink's bad writting contest? (If it's not I'm sorry.)

I like all kinds of different genres, but I always like a story better if it has some romance in it, so that's why it's is my favourite genre. I ...

This was a really well done story. The only problem I have is with this paragraph: Despite his highly appalling habits and inappropriate actions, many of my irritating peers have ...

This is for Snoink's bad writting contest. I hope you like it (do I mean don't like it?)! Once upon a time, there was a beautiful princess. She had long ...

I am a total sucker for stories like these. Gotta love happy endings. My only problem was that the end was a little cliche, I don't mean the way it ...

Thanks a lot for helping me out, Tayler. I will now go crazy with google to see what these books are about. I've read three of Eva Ibbotson's novels and ...

What kind of books do I like? Lots. Right now I'm kinda into historical fiction, but I'll read pretty much anything that sounds interesting. Like I said before I don't ...

Welcome to YWS! It's great getting new members. People like you spice things up a bit! I'm not into fantasy, so I don't really have an opinion there. I share ...

Nice story! I just have a few suggestions. You’re constantly switching between past tense and present tense. “My heart was racing as I sped through the twisty roads in the ...

I honestly can say that I really liked this. You should definitely keep going with it. I would suggest that at the beginning of each new point of view, you ...