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JudyAngel101

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Teen Angst and Rebellious Mistakes

    Ok, so it needs some work, It didn't feel like a poem, more like lyrics to Rihanna's song. Just like some others mentioned, some of the stuff in your poem ...

    Aug 28, 2008


May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death.
— An Unknown Bride, Leap Year