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  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

    Um...

    Jun 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: A Haiku About Butts

    Oh good lord I know what you saying ;)

    Jun 3, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Cookie Smugglers

    Thanks! Tried to do a quick fix with the things you mentioned! Hope they flow a little better. Smithy was my favorite character too, I'm honestly kind of considering a ...

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Cookie Smugglers

    Thanks so much Lavvie! I'll try to work on the things you mentioned!

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: (Are You) Gay?

    how is tasteless? is pigeon. pigeon taste like chicken.

    May 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 2.1

    I've tried reviewing this chapter four times now. It always gets me stuck. I don't have anything to say. My brain is stuck in a sludge. Forgive me.

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Our Unrealistic Society

    Why must we live in a civilization that scrutinize everything you ever do Because somewhere there’s a girl who cries herself to sleep, A boy who’s afraid to be weak ...

    Jan 16, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: EMPTY

    Pooooooooooooooooooooooooop. That's all I have to say.

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Health, Satire Re: The Mad King [annotated]

    Thanks for this! This brightened up my day!

    Dec 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: A Christmas Story [part one]

    I'm not saying it's bad, I can name two bullies who were one dimensional that were great fun. (Draco Malfoy, Ambrose Jakis)

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Satire, Horror Re: To: Therapist From: Werewolf

    :)

    Jun 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Science Fiction Re: Mind Reader

    Well, the Last of Us is a totally unoriginal story, but it's still great. What I was trying to say was I think a story that feels like a ripoff ...

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Science Fiction Re: Worth Fighting For: Prologue

    You're very welcome. :)

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: What Have We Done?

    Blank. (I tried to make what I wanted to say coherent, but it didn't work out. So here it is.)

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Patchworld 5

    And once again I'm back. Steve is an odd tendency I have to point out my own faults so people don't mock me for it. (Way to leave that out ...

    Jan 17, 2015


You can cut all the flowers, but you cannot stop Spring from coming.
— Pablo Neruda