Juncboks

I really liked it. The concept was enjoyable and I liked your word choice and descriptions. Though I think you got confusing in places and some sentence fluency was bumpy. ...

I actually like this poem. I'm not sure everyone else caught that last line. I would ahve to say that the beginning had me shocked at it's audacity yet was ...

I'm suprised there aren't other comments! this piece moved me like jazz and I love jazz. Your tone is smooth and it pulls upon my depths. The dance you perform ...