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Juncboks

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Assassin's Rampage

    I really liked it. The concept was enjoyable and I liked your word choice and descriptions. Though I think you got confusing in places and some sentence fluency was bumpy. ...

    May 28, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Ode to Me

    I actually like this poem. I'm not sure everyone else caught that last line. I would ahve to say that the beginning had me shocked at it's audacity yet was ...

    May 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Jazz and Tango

    I'm suprised there aren't other comments! this piece moved me like jazz and I love jazz. Your tone is smooth and it pulls upon my depths. The dance you perform ...

    May 20, 2008


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind