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I really liked it! It made tear up a little bit towards the end. You kept the rhyming consistent, as far as I know. But, overall it was a very ...

That's so cool. But, we have an ant problem at my house, so if it were me. I would've killed those ants instead of taking pictures of them. But, they ...

I really liked the description, and how the story flowed in such a beautiful way. One little nit pick Another rocket is on is way It should be, "Another rocket ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It kind of gave me the creeps, which is a good thing. You really locked the reader in, and made them fill your characters ...

Okay, I know the first chapter kind of sucked, but I really wanted to post the next chapter because I love to know what people think about it. Preface: One ...

Wow, that was really good. I couldn't stop reading watch for that last line you forgot a quotation mark, but that's the only grammar problem I saw. I really enjoyed ...

This was really good. I got the message and it reminded me of me and my best friend. Now, it didn't flow the way I thought it would, it could ...

Two words: AMEN SISTER!!! I know how you feel, and this piece couldn't be anymore truthful. Some might think it's gross, but that's just how women work. You showed perfect ...

Well, it's not that they talk to me. It's more like I talk to them. Sorta, in my head I imagine I'm in the same situation they're in. And I ...

It was very good. It showed a lot of emotion through out. Now there were some parts that you were phasing (music term: meaning that it's not in sinc and ...

It was good. I couldn't stop reading, it was very short and simple, which to me is a good thing. So, overall great story! keep on writing!

I loved it!! I don't know why but it reminded me of the little book called rainbow fish. He had all these pretty shiny rainbow scales and no one else ...

Okay, when I was in seventh grade I entered this poem contest (that I didn't win), and when I read the winner's poem. I was inspired to write this piece. ...

Oh my gosh! I loved it! There were a couple of typos in there that you might need to look over. But, good diction, strong voice throughout the piece. Overall ...

Don't we all get easily side tracked! Welcome to this site man! You're gonna love it here I just know it!! :D