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Hey there, wow this is really amazing. Normally I wouldn't read something quite this long, but I just couldn't stop reading, I was really pulled in. There was only one ...

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Hey, again I'm loving the story!! The boring stuff, Grammatical Etc. errors: causing even more goosebumps to appear on my arms . You don't need this as you've already specified ...

Hey there, I saw your second chapter up and thought I'd jump over here first and review this! The boring stuff first, Grammatical Etc. errors: I think that the worse ...

Hey, I love the story! The only big thing that I see that should probably be fixed it that each line of dialogue should be separated into a new paragraph ...

Hey again! The story is getting really good, I don't know if I'll be able to get it off my mind after this chapter haha. Anyway onto the reviewing. I ...

Hey, first I want to welcome you to YWS!! This is a lovely little story and i hope my review helps you. The boring stuff, Grammatical Etc. errors: just arrived ...

Hey there, this is really amazing and super powerful. First the boring stuff Grammatical Etc. errors: While I listened to her words, and hoped she wouldn't cry. This is slightly ...

Hey there, this is great and I can't wait to read more!!! First the boring stuff Grammatical Etc. errors: The First Chapter As the entire thing is only a couple ...

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Hey there, this really sums up what I feel at times. Depression is hard to write about, it is complicated like you have said and that is shown by how ...

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Hey, I love where this seems to be headed you have an interesting story that you are trying to tell and I am enjoying reading it. I also LOVE your ...

Hey there! What a wonderful story! Ok well, let's get the boring stuff over with first. Grammatical Etc. errors: figures stood in a trench of mud and grass, a circular ...