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  • Fanfiction Novels Re: FB Book 1 Ch 1 Part A

    Hi Fruits Basket! Here I [finally] am! I must confess that I'm not too much of a fanfic or anime fan, and have never read this anime, so my knowledge ...

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Run Away: Run Faster

    Hey there, Spiral. I'm June, your critic for the moment. I don't think you have quite delivered as much interest for your audience as you could have. Though the primary ...

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: 100 Reviews in 15 days!

    I'm lagging badly. It's getting harder for me to type, so I've only done 962-947 reviews... which is... 13? 15? No idea. I need to seriously step up my game. ...

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Slide - Photography - [Updated Dec. 6]

    Thanks again for the commentary, everyone. I have another shot of Summer Poetry, but I'm not sure if I like it, because the angle's a bit bland; I'm not sure ...

    Dec 7, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Riddle me this!

    What is lighter than air, can be seen by unaided eyes, and if you put it in a barrel it will make the barrel lighter?

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Two Quick Updates (Dec. 6 2009)

    This is awesome! Thank you, Nate!

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Questions and Answers Re: If Pinocchio...

    If Pinocchio said that his nose was about to grow, would it?

    Dec 6, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The day my life went wrong

    Hey Forest, I'm going to be blatantly honest in this review. Hope I'm not too harsh. :) I don't like this. It feels like you were trying to give your ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hopes and Dreams

    Hey Forest, About a year and a half ago, someone told me that in writing poetry you have to distinguish your narrative story voice from your poetic voice. If you're ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: LordLoredaen's Art Thread

    Hey there! Nice drawings! I recommend going over human figure - or should I say alien figure- a bit because the joints are a bit rounded and soft where they ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: More of My Drawings

    Hey thar, I like your style, Dreamer. Your sketches are rather rustic and nonetheless rather brilliant. I wish I could draw like you. :) I would recommend strengthening your outer ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Bubblez

    Hey Channon! These are good. The angle is interesting - which is good - but, the composition is a little off-kilter. Her chin is cut off, and I think it ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: To Be a Proton

    Ell! I liked this! I do heavily agree with Snoinkarina that 'they' is a weak word in poetry. Kill the usage of it, and 'that' as much as you can ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Life not Lived

    Hey there, Holianthus! My deepest apologies for not reviewing this sooner. I quite enjoyed this, Holly. I would reword the beginning-- it sounds like the words are uncertain and the ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: monarchs

    Hey there, Kylan, Things brings to mind modern Japanese poetry -- or reformed haiku as some would put it. On an examined read, it does show a bit, haha, that ...

    Dec 6, 2009


Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.
— Ann Landers