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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Ultraviolet Catastrophe -- Summer Poetry 2010

    Kylan, Kylan, how long has it been since I've told you what I think of your works? I adore them, simply put. On période rose et bleu (or, deserts) of ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Snowflakes from Erebus

    Hi, Galerius, me here, When you first asked me to take a look at this, (which was recent enough that you should be able to recall it ;)) I remember ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: *Amar* *Vivo* *Crea* *Fe*

    Hey fire :) Love's life creates faith ? So, I think this poem is cute in its meaning, and the fact that you threw the Spanish acronym in there creates ...

    Jul 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: We are Poets

    Hi, July Ruby! Given the nature of this poem, I think you have a lot of room to reach beyond what you've covered here, and expand this idea, because, in ...

    Jul 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Last Words

    Hi, Hibiscus, have we met? I'm June. :) Creative work here. I think that you did a nice job with this poem, but a major issue I'm having with it ...

    Jul 19, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold

    Hi, Sierra, I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you. :) I have to say, it's a catchy song you've based this off of. Let's get to work: ...

    Jul 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The colour purple

    Hey, Retro Disco, June here, I enjoyed this poem; it's simply put, it's concise, and it's complete, meaning that it doesn't leave us hanging at the end. I enjoyed your ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I once knew a girl

    Hey there, Uo, June here, I don't really feel as if you delivered the story to us in the best manner you could have. I feel like it's a series ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Revenant

    Well, hello there, and look, a critique in the same day I promise it. I think I'm getting better. In passing, I've discussed some aspect or another of this poem ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Let There Be Blight

    Gal, I've postponed finish this far too long, and haven't quite said as much on it as I would've what with brain being not working and stuff, but here we ...

    Jul 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Rain

    Hey there, I feel that this poem has potential, but I'm not quite certain that you've reached it. The concept of rain masking tears is cliche in an emo-istic sense, ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Insomniac

    Hey there, Nicely done! I enjoyed the short length of the lines, the easy read to this, and the fact that you kept it light until the end. I'm going ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Night Sky

    Hi Coter, I'm June, your reviewer for the momento -- I found that this was centered around the sensory details, dear, on things like feelings and scent and sight. I ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Life I Didn't Need

    Hey there, duckling, This is a poem that left me wondering, and I'm not sure if I want to highlight on that as a positive or a negative, but frankly ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Boring Phone-Calls

    Jasmine, I always look to your poetry as a source of inspiration. There's something unique to you about them that never les me down, as it's always fresh and unpredictable ...

    Jun 27, 2010


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